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[In the early afternoon, under a gray sky, Ib and her parents were on their way to an art gallery.
"Did you remember everything, Ib?
Oh! Do you have your handkerchief? You know, the one you got for your birthday?
Keep it safe in your pocket, okay? Don't lose it!]

Come, let us play a game
No adults will ever know
That you disappeared
To our little show

Come into the portal
Many friends are waiting
For you to arrive
To a world of paintings

Just take a step
Into the deep Abyss
You'll be fine, just trust me
We promise that you won't be missed

Keep your rose close to you
5 petals, see?
Each one that's pulled off
Represents an injury

Don't get too close to the walls
Don't break the mannequins
Each holds many consequences
Make sure you don't lose your senses

Come, let us play a game
A game which will risk your life
Three you will hold
Don't fill them with strife

Such a colorful world
For you all to explore
Don't get lost in it
Just keep walking forward

Find the key and
Quickly head for home
Take his hand, don't stay
Don't be all alone

When all of this is done
Don't look back, just walk away
Because we don't want you to be all alone

[Because we will surely meet again]
[These mean the line is spoken]
Lyrics for the main title of Ib
This is merely a draft. Let me know what you think~! :3
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:iconlillyfroo:
lillyfroo Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2014
I sang this to the theme to see how it sounded... I got the timing wrong, but it worked out.
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:iconflutterhooves:
FlutterHooves Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I tried it when I first made it
...Not my best work at all >.>"
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Pewdiepie-Fan390 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2013
*Le gasp* so good!!!
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whointime Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013
Nice song
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StrawberryCrescent Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2012
ooo~ I like it! It has a good ring to it :D
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:iconflutterhooves:
FlutterHooves Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :3
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Yukai-yami Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012
For a draft, it's really good! :)
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:iconflutterhooves:
FlutterHooves Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :3
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:iconhollyleaf18:
Hollyleaf18 Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is amazinnnng.. ouo
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:iconflutterhooves:
FlutterHooves Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :3
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ChibiSweets Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012
I like it, deep and so very pretty!
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:iconflutterhooves:
FlutterHooves Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :3
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GhostStoryMaster Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012
oh i saw this picture on zerochan ^^ [link]
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:iconflutterhooves:
FlutterHooves Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
^^ That's where I got it :3
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:iconghoststorymaster:
GhostStoryMaster Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012
oh i thot u drew it lol ^^
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:iconflutterhooves:
FlutterHooves Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Haha...no :'D I wish
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GreenieCake Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love this so much. You have earned my eternal respect.
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:iconflutterhooves:
FlutterHooves Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you ;//w//;
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GreenieCake Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconib-plz::icongarryplz::iconmaryibplz:
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Sky-Lily Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is freaking awesome and so fitting for the game. 8D
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:iconflutterhooves:
FlutterHooves Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :3
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:iconmelonchrisie:
MelonChrisie Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Wow. Just wow. I am speechless at this. It's like the entire Ib game condensed into a poem. I love how you implied the "All Alone" ending in your poem and the ending is just perfect! And this is just a draft you say? I can't wait to read the whole thing!! :heart:
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:iconflutterhooves:
FlutterHooves Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Oh, my, thank you! ;///A///;'
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:iconmelonchrisie:
MelonChrisie Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
No problem, I meant every word I said! I really hope you can finish it soon! But no hurry, take your time. Slow and steady wins the race after all! 8D
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:iconflutterhooves:
FlutterHooves Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! If you're not already, watch me. I'll be putting this up on youtube *The lyrics*
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:iconmelonchrisie:
MelonChrisie Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Sure, why not? So you'll be reading/singing this and putting it up on youtube? :3
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:iconflutterhooves:
FlutterHooves Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yuppers
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Crusher-P Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2012  Professional General Artist
it's so pretty!!!!!!!!!!
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:iconflutterhooves:
FlutterHooves Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you ;w;
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